New writings
Tuesday, September 8th, 2009 12:59 amTomorrow I hope to be able to post up the latest part of Dimpler Towers somwhat later than intended.
For the first time, I have run this past someone for comments ahead of publishing - in this case
ellefurtle, who has made a number of useful suggestions, not least concerning sentence length! So while what you will see is all my own work, it's not the first iteration by a long chalk.
In the meantime, I am looking for a new name for the village: we're not sure that Little-Whittering-in-the-Stubble really works, though I have left it that for now. I am having difficulty in coming up with a fictional village name that sounds plausible but odd; the moreso because there are many real village names in England that just sound odd.
Any suggestions?
Edited to add: Typo there - it's Little-Whittering-in-the Stubble, which I have now corrected.
For the first time, I have run this past someone for comments ahead of publishing - in this case
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In the meantime, I am looking for a new name for the village: we're not sure that Little-Whittering-in-the-Stubble really works, though I have left it that for now. I am having difficulty in coming up with a fictional village name that sounds plausible but odd; the moreso because there are many real village names in England that just sound odd.
Any suggestions?
Edited to add: Typo there - it's Little-Whittering-in-the Stubble, which I have now corrected.